Seventh batch of the ongoing write-good.Passive pass (hyperhive#4042):
read all 65 hits across jobq.md/ci.md/observability.md/coordinator.md
in context and rewrote 41 with a clearly nameable actor -- mostly
hive-c0re, nix/the nix module, the harness, or a specific fn/type
named right there or nearby (coordinator.md's node-inventory table
and DAG-shape descriptions name concrete Rust items constantly, so
the actor is almost always sitting in the same sentence).
Left 24 alone: predicate-adjective-copula state descriptions ("is
stuck", "is gone", "is unaffected", "is done", etc. -- the largest
recurring bucket this batch, especially in observability.md's
scope/status descriptions), negative-capability idioms ("no X is
needed/left", "X can't be written down"), the established "is
tracked as a follow-up" idiom, a firewall-shorthand notation
("bridge->127.0.0.0/8 is dropped") where rewriting would break the
compact rule-like format, a CLI-flag "(repeatable)" annotation ("May
be repeated"), a Rust type-signature fact ("`moves` is typed ..."),
a hypothetical/counterfactual maintenance-burden clause, a
readiness-condition list ("a node is ready when ... every dep is
satisfied"), and one deliberately-parallel idiom pair
("When OTEL is enabled" used identically twice as a section-opening
convention -- fixing one would break the parallelism, not the
opposite).
One self-caught regression: an early attempt to fix "used by every
`Reconcile` node's start action" (a reduced participial clause, not
flagged) into "is used by every `Reconcile` node's start action"
introduced a brand-new flagged passive. Caught by the post-edit vale
count (expected 65->24, got 65->25) not matching, same discipline as
the docs/turn-loop batch's tail-truncation catch -- re-ran with
active voice instead ("Every `Reconcile` node's start action uses
this fallback").
Verified via vale before/after: 65 -> 24 write-good.Passive hits,
exactly the 24 left alone above; error count and other warning
categories unchanged. Re-read every changed line in full surrounding
context after editing before running the final vale check.
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