docs: fix capitalization losses + one text corruption from the contractions pass

Review pass on top of the previous commit (85a94671) turned up three
real issues its own vale-only verification didn't catch:

- 'has not' -> 'hasn't' fired inside 'has nothing', corrupting
  docs/swarm/README.md into 'hasn'thing to say upward'. Restored
  'has nothing'.
- ~44 hits where the original text was genuinely sentence-initial
  ('It is', 'That is', 'They are', 'What is', 'Do not', ...) got
  contracted in lowercase, silently de-capitalizing the start of a
  sentence. Checked each one's real surrounding text and capitalized
  the ones that needed it.
- Confirmed (by reading the actual text, not just trusting vale) that
  the 3 remaining 'is not'/'has not'/'it is' hits after those fixes are
  vale's own false positives: it matches these as a bare substring with
  no trailing word boundary, so it also fires on 'is nothing', 'has
  nothing', and the already-correct 'it isn't'. Left those alone --
  there's no real issue in the text.

Re-verified with a fresh vale run: the remaining 17 hits are exactly
the union of the 14 legitimate ALL-CAPS/bold-emphasis skips from the
first commit and these 3 false positives. Full accounting in
/agents/iris/state/haiku-batches/contractions-report.md.
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iris 2026-09-07 14:56:04 +02:00 committed by mara
commit ff377b0dee
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@ -7,11 +7,11 @@ complete a migration.
Two things it's not, both worth stating because both are common
assumptions:
- **it's not the swarm controller**, and doesn't depend on one. it's
- **It's not the swarm controller**, and doesn't depend on one. It's
a NixOS host role: a btrfs subvolume tree, a socket-activated
receiver, and the `wg-hive` interface the swarm module already brings
up. that's why it can be deployed before any controller exists.
- **it's not a backup product.** It happens to hold the data a backup
up. That's why it can be deployed before any controller exists.
- **It's not a backup product.** It happens to hold the data a backup
would hold, and it should be operated accordingly (see
[Operating it](#operating-it)) --- but nothing in it does scheduling,
verification, or restore orchestration.
@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ services.hyperhive.swarm.snapshotStore = {
Two deliberate asymmetries in that pair, both liable to be misread as
inconsistency:
- **`address` has no default.** it's a deployment fact a pushing hive
- **`address` has no default.** It's a deployment fact a pushing hive
can't derive, and a wrong guess means streaming an agent's state at
whatever happens to answer. Unset, a push fails naming this option.
- **`port` does default** (`51821`), because it's a convention both
@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ inconsistency:
coordination, not a guess.
Note the option lives under `swarm.*` while the receiving host's lives
under `services.hyperhive.snapshotStore`. that's the distinction the
under `services.hyperhive.snapshotStore`. That's the distinction the
two namespaces carry throughout: `swarm.*` describes _the swarm_ as seen
from this host, and a bare `services.hyperhive.<service>` describes _a
role this host performs_. A store host sets both --- one to run the
@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ and no credential argument, because the mesh is the authentication.
## The mesh is the authentication
There are no certificates here, and no key material of its own. that's
There are no certificates here, and no key material of its own. That's
deliberate rather than an omission.
WireGuard's cryptokey routing already binds a peer's source address to
@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ The rule that matters:
Validation is an allowlist --- `[A-Za-z0-9_-]+` and nothing else. No
slash and no dot means neither directory traversal nor an absolute path
can survive it. it's deliberately an allowlist and not a list of
can survive it. It's deliberately an allowlist and not a list of
forbidden characters: a blocklist only ever excludes the attacks
somebody already thought of.
@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ nobody runs it day to day, so it rots and is discovered broken in
production.
⚠️ **The assumption to keep true over time:** the store host runs
nothing else. that's true on day one and quietly false the day someone
nothing else. That's true on day one and quietly false the day someone
notices the box has spare disk. Nothing in the config objects when it
stops being true.