docs: fix write-good.So/ThereIs/Weasel lint findings

Fixes the "obvious ones first" slice of #4042 (mara: do the obvious
ones first) -- 81 hits across write-good.So, write-good.ThereIs, and
write-good.Weasel, all in docs/. Each is a genuine sentence rewrite
(lead with the real subject instead of "There is/are", drop a
sentence-initial "So ", replace a vague intensifier), not a blind
regex substitution -- read every hit in its real file context before
touching it.

3 of the 81 hits were in CI-generated CLI docs (docs/tools/{hivectl,
swarmctl,forge}-cli.md) -- fixed at the clap #[arg(...)]/doc-comment
source in hivectl/src/cli.rs, swarmctl/src/main.rs, and
hive-forge/src/verbs/repo_add_collaborator.rs, then regenerated via
each crate's `markdown-docs` subcommand so CI's freshness check stays
green.

Verified: fresh vale re-run shows 0 remaining So/ThereIs/Weasel hits
and no new hits introduced (983->982, exactly the one incidental fix
this pass also picked up at docs/scheduler/observability.md:48).
cargo fmt --check and clippy clean on the three touched crates.

Remaining write-good backlog (Passive: 726, TooWordy: 207) is
judgment-heavy and left for a follow-up slice of #4042, not bulk-
rewritten here.
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iris 2026-09-07 16:47:54 +02:00 committed by mara
commit e82a735745
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@ -143,11 +143,11 @@ Drilldown_ app is deliberately not installed: it only supports Loki, and
no setting here changes that, so Explore is the log browser for this
swarm.
| Option | When you'd touch it |
| ------------------------------------- | -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
| `deploy.victorialogs.retentionPeriod` | Default `30d`, far shorter than the metrics store's — logs are bulkier per unit of value and are usually read within days of being written. Raise it if you need to answer questions about last quarter. |
| `swarm.victorialogs.domain` | Only to rename it. |
| `swarm.victorialogs.port` | Only if something else on the services host already claims `9428`. |
| Option | When you'd touch it |
| ------------------------------------- | ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
| `deploy.victorialogs.retentionPeriod` | Default `30d`, far shorter than the metrics store's — logs are bulkier per unit of value and are typically read within days of being written. Raise it if you need to answer questions about last quarter. |
| `swarm.victorialogs.domain` | Only to rename it. |
| `swarm.victorialogs.port` | Only if something else on the services host already claims `9428`. |
Like the metrics store, it binds loopback and takes no credential of its
own: the gateway vhost is the only way in, and the collector is the only
@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ port is a coin toss at runtime rather than an error at build time.
Every hive's own collector reaches this one by its gateway name,
`swarm.otel.domain` (default `otel.<swarm domain>`) — the same
by-domain-through-the-gateway shape every other swarm service uses, not a
loopback URL an operator has to redirect. There is nothing to set on a hive
loopback URL an operator has to redirect. Nothing needs setting on a hive
that doesn't run the swarm's services; the name resolves through the
gateway either way.