docs: fix write-good.So/ThereIs/Weasel lint findings
Fixes the "obvious ones first" slice of #4042 (mara: do the obvious ones first) -- 81 hits across write-good.So, write-good.ThereIs, and write-good.Weasel, all in docs/. Each is a genuine sentence rewrite (lead with the real subject instead of "There is/are", drop a sentence-initial "So ", replace a vague intensifier), not a blind regex substitution -- read every hit in its real file context before touching it. 3 of the 81 hits were in CI-generated CLI docs (docs/tools/{hivectl, swarmctl,forge}-cli.md) -- fixed at the clap #[arg(...)]/doc-comment source in hivectl/src/cli.rs, swarmctl/src/main.rs, and hive-forge/src/verbs/repo_add_collaborator.rs, then regenerated via each crate's `markdown-docs` subcommand so CI's freshness check stays green. Verified: fresh vale re-run shows 0 remaining So/ThereIs/Weasel hits and no new hits introduced (983->982, exactly the one incidental fix this pass also picked up at docs/scheduler/observability.md:48). cargo fmt --check and clippy clean on the three touched crates. Remaining write-good backlog (Passive: 726, TooWordy: 207) is judgment-heavy and left for a follow-up slice of #4042, not bulk- rewritten here.
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`domain` is required too, but you no longer _write_ it: it's read from
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this hive's own entry in the directory, whose `domain` defaults to
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`<name>.<swarm.domain>`. So a conventional swarm states no addresses at
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`<name>.<swarm.domain>`. A conventional swarm states no addresses at
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all, and a hive addressed by something else states it in the one place
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the other hives read — `swarm.hives.edge.domain = "edge.elsewhere.example";`.
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@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ contain you derives every hive as a peer and you peer with yourself.
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conventionally `<name>.<swarm.domain>`, but a wrong domain that
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evaluates cleanly points at a real machine that isn't the one you meant.
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> **There is no per-hive CA field, and no per-hive cert pinning.** Trust
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> **No per-hive CA field exists, and no per-hive cert pinning.** Trust
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> inside a swarm comes from the swarm root ([`ca.md`](ca.md)): every
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> hive chains to it, so one anchor replaces per-hive pinning entirely.
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> What that genuinely drops is trusting a hive whose root this swarm
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