docs: fix alex whitelist + condescending-word findings
Fixes the 'genuine' bucket from #4040's triage: whitelist/allowlist (6 hits across 5 files, including a heading rename in turn-loop/mcp.md -- checked no anchor links reference it first) and the simply/obvious/easy condescending-word cluster (10 of 13 hits, real sentence-level rewrites rather than mechanical deletion so nothing reads awkwardly). Left 3 alex.Condescending hits untouched on purpose: integrations/matrix.md:271 and process/conventions.md:442 both say "non-obvious", swarm/ca.md:162 says "not obvious" -- alex matched the substring "obvious" inside a negated phrase, the literal opposite of condescending. Flagging these on the issue rather than silently leaving them out.
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@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ evaluates cleanly points at a real machine that isn't the one you meant.
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⚠️ **That container currently trusts no swarm-internal CA**, so a
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self-signed gateway certificate does not federate. The swarm root
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can't simply be listed there: `security.pki.certificateFiles` is
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can't be listed there: `security.pki.certificateFiles` is
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read when the system is _built_, and the root is a runtime file (its
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key must never enter the store), so there is no build-time name for
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it. Bridging that needs a runtime mechanism and is tracked as its own
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@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ It defaults from `services.hyperhive.deploy.singleHostSwarm`, the single
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switch that says "this box is the whole deployment".
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**A hive given neither artifact keeps the self-signed CA it has always
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had.** It serves TLS exactly as before and simply isn't part of a
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had.** It serves TLS exactly as before and isn't part of a
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swarm's trust hierarchy — the right outcome for a hive nobody has
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federated yet. Only `autoConfigure` issues a hive sub-CA, because only
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that case can: signing one needs the root's private key.
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@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ the surface the hive's own domain serves (dashboard, per-agent routing,
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matrix discovery); a swarm service declares its own vhost next to its
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own options, the way `swarm-ui.nix` and `swarm-authelia.nix` do.
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⚠️ The certificate one is the least obvious and the most visible when
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⚠️ The certificate one is the hardest to predict and the most visible when
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missed. `serviceDomains` is _both_ the services sub-CA's
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`nameConstraints` set and the leaf's SAN list, and the apex is a
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**sibling** of `forge.<swarm>` / `chat.<swarm>` / `auth.<swarm>`, not a
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