docs: fix alex whitelist + condescending-word findings

Fixes the 'genuine' bucket from #4040's triage: whitelist/allowlist
(6 hits across 5 files, including a heading rename in turn-loop/mcp.md
-- checked no anchor links reference it first) and the
simply/obvious/easy condescending-word cluster (10 of 13 hits, real
sentence-level rewrites rather than mechanical deletion so nothing
reads awkwardly).

Left 3 alex.Condescending hits untouched on purpose:
integrations/matrix.md:271 and process/conventions.md:442 both say
"non-obvious", swarm/ca.md:162 says "not obvious" -- alex matched
the substring "obvious" inside a negated phrase, the literal opposite
of condescending. Flagging these on the issue rather than silently
leaving them out.
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iris 2026-09-07 12:46:47 +02:00 committed by mara
commit cd252ca6b2
10 changed files with 19 additions and 19 deletions

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@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ evaluates cleanly points at a real machine that isn't the one you meant.
⚠️ **That container currently trusts no swarm-internal CA**, so a
self-signed gateway certificate does not federate. The swarm root
can't simply be listed there: `security.pki.certificateFiles` is
can't be listed there: `security.pki.certificateFiles` is
read when the system is _built_, and the root is a runtime file (its
key must never enter the store), so there is no build-time name for
it. Bridging that needs a runtime mechanism and is tracked as its own

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@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ It defaults from `services.hyperhive.deploy.singleHostSwarm`, the single
switch that says "this box is the whole deployment".
**A hive given neither artifact keeps the self-signed CA it has always
had.** It serves TLS exactly as before and simply isn't part of a
had.** It serves TLS exactly as before and isn't part of a
swarm's trust hierarchy — the right outcome for a hive nobody has
federated yet. Only `autoConfigure` issues a hive sub-CA, because only
that case can: signing one needs the root's private key.

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@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ the surface the hive's own domain serves (dashboard, per-agent routing,
matrix discovery); a swarm service declares its own vhost next to its
own options, the way `swarm-ui.nix` and `swarm-authelia.nix` do.
⚠️ The certificate one is the least obvious and the most visible when
⚠️ The certificate one is the hardest to predict and the most visible when
missed. `serviceDomains` is _both_ the services sub-CA's
`nameConstraints` set and the leaf's SAN list, and the apex is a
**sibling** of `forge.<swarm>` / `chat.<swarm>` / `auth.<swarm>`, not a