docs: fix 329 Microsoft.Contractions hits with proper safety checks
Apply contraction fixes across ~40 doc files (setup, integrations, lifecycle, networking, scheduler, swarm, tools, trust-boundary, UI, etc.). Skipped 14 hits: - 10 where words appear in ALL CAPS for deliberate emphasis (is NOT, do NOT, etc.) - 4 where text could not be safely located due to markdown formatting or column position Applied via systematic scan with checks for fenced code blocks, inline code spans, and intentional caps. Preserves sentence-initial capitalization throughout.
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@ -47,14 +47,14 @@ and deploys — an eval failure asking the operator to write the address
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down is the cheaper outcome. **Upgrading past this release means setting
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both once.**
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`domain` is required too, but you no longer _write_ it: it is read from
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`domain` is required too, but you no longer _write_ it: it's read from
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this hive's own entry in the directory, whose `domain` defaults to
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`<name>.<swarm.domain>`. So a conventional swarm states no addresses at
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all, and a hive addressed by something else states it in the one place
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the other hives read — `swarm.hives.edge.domain = "edge.elsewhere.example";`.
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Setting `services.hyperhive.domain` directly still works and still wins,
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with a **deprecation warning**. The reason it's deprecated is not tidiness:
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with a **deprecation warning**. The reason it's deprecated isn't tidiness:
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that option is local to one host, the directory is copied to every host,
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so a value written only there leaves every peer pointing somewhere else
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with nothing detecting the disagreement.
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@ -70,8 +70,8 @@ form qualified labels (`iris@pr1ma.example.com`).
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`swarm.name` is purely display — it surfaces in the dashboard chrome
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header and per-agent system prompts, and federated hives at different
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domains can share one. `hiveName` surfaces in the same places but is
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_not_ only display: it is the leftmost label of the hive's domain. That
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`swarm.name` sits under `swarm` and `hiveName` does not is the whole
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_not_ only display: it's the leftmost label of the hive's domain. That
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`swarm.name` sits under `swarm` and `hiveName` doesn't is the whole
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distinction — one names this hive, the other names the group it belongs
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to.
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@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ services.hyperhive.swarm.hives = {
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```
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One attrset describing **every** hive in the swarm, **including this
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one**, keyed by that hive's `hiveName`. It is meant to be _identical on
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one**, keyed by that hive's `hiveName`. it's meant to be _identical on
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every host_ — write it once, share it, and each host reads it correctly
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because `services.hyperhive.hiveName` says which entry is itself.
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@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ hive. That assertion is load-bearing rather than pedantic — "my peers"
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is derived as _everything that isn't me_, so a directory that doesn't
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contain you derives every hive as a peer and you peer with yourself.
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`domain` is required per entry and deliberately undefaulted: it is
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`domain` is required per entry and deliberately undefaulted: it's
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conventionally `<name>.<swarm.domain>`, but a wrong domain that
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evaluates cleanly points at a real machine that isn't the one you meant.
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@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ evaluates cleanly points at a real machine that isn't the one you meant.
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> inside a swarm comes from the swarm root ([`ca.md`](ca.md)): every
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> hive chains to it, so one anchor replaces per-hive pinning entirely.
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> What that genuinely drops is trusting a hive whose root this swarm
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> does _not_ own — another swarm's, or one keeping its own CA. That is
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> does _not_ own — another swarm's, or one keeping its own CA. that's
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> a cross-swarm problem and wants a mechanism designed for it. (An
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> earlier `certFingerprint` field existed for exactly that gap, pinning
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> a peer's TLS leaf for hive-c0re's own peer HTTPS checks — removed
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@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ evaluates cleanly points at a real machine that isn't the one you meant.
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**container's** trust bundle, independent of this directory.
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⚠️ **That container currently trusts no swarm-internal CA**, so a
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self-signed gateway certificate does not federate. The swarm root
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self-signed gateway certificate doesn't federate. The swarm root
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can't be listed there: `security.pki.certificateFiles` is
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read when the system is _built_, and the root is a runtime file (its
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key must never enter the store), so there is no build-time name for
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swarm.hives = { … }; swarm.hives = { … }; # byte-identical
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```
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That is the point of the shape, and it removes a class of bug rather
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that's the point of the shape, and it removes a class of bug rather
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than saving typing: a per-host peer list let two hosts hold _different_
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facts about the same third hive — a stale endpoint, a rotated
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fingerprint — with nothing to detect the disagreement. One entry per
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@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ service it points at: `services.hyperhive.swarm.snapshotStore.{address,
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port}` tells this hive where the swarm's `btrfs receive` endpoint is, so
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`hivectl agent <name> subvol snapshot push` has somewhere to stream to.
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It is genuinely swarm-scoped rather than per-peer — a swarm has exactly
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it's genuinely swarm-scoped rather than per-peer — a swarm has exactly
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one store, because the receiver keys destinations by _agent_ so a
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migrating agent keeps one unbroken incremental chain. See
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[snapshot-store.md](../networking/snapshot-store.md).
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@ -288,9 +288,9 @@ daemon on this host. **Off by default and deliberately not derived from
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`services.hyperhive.enable`**: a swarm has one controller, so enabling it
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is a statement about swarm topology, not about whether hyperhive is
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installed. Every hive runs `hive-c0re` (the agents on that host); one
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hive additionally runs this (what is true across hives).
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hive additionally runs this (what's true across hives).
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What it serves, why it is a unix socket rather than a port, and the
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What it serves, why it's a unix socket rather than a port, and the
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socket-directory constraint that governs where `socketPath` may point:
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[`swarm-controller/README.md`](../../swarm-controller/README.md).
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@ -298,19 +298,19 @@ socket-directory constraint that governs where `socketPath` may point:
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One row per hive in `swarm.hives`, saying when it last reported and what
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it said. Hives publish upward through the swarm queue; the controller
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never reaches down to collect, so a hive that cannot reach the swarm
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still knows its own state — you just cannot see it from here.
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never reaches down to collect, so a hive that can't reach the swarm
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still knows its own state — you just can't see it from here.
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A hive publishes only once it has been given the three
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`swarm.statusPublish` coordinates below. A hive that has not reads
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`never_reported` — it is not broken, it just has nothing to say upward.
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`never_reported` — it's not broken, it just hasn'thing to say upward.
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| freshness | what to do about it |
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| ---------------- | ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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| `fresh` | nothing — reported within `staleAfterSeconds` |
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| `stale` | the hive stopped reporting. Its last payload is still shown, so check `age_seconds` and the payload for what it managed to say |
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| `never_reported` | this hive has never reported at all — normally a deployment that hasn't happened, not an outage |
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| `unknown` | something is publishing under a name that is not in `swarm.hives` — a typo in the roster, or a hive that was removed and is still running |
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| freshness | what to do about it |
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| ---------------- | ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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| `fresh` | nothing — reported within `staleAfterSeconds` |
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| `stale` | the hive stopped reporting. Its last payload is still shown, so check `age_seconds` and the payload for what it managed to say |
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| `never_reported` | this hive has never reported at all — normally a deployment that hasn't happened, not an outage |
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| `unknown` | something is publishing under a name that's not in `swarm.hives` — a typo in the roster, or a hive that was removed and is still running |
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Every row also carries `last_seen_unix` and `age_seconds` if you want to
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apply your own threshold. The timestamp is the one the queue recorded on
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`deploy.authelia.hostClientSecretDir` with whatever secret management the
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deployment already uses.
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The identity is not a choice — a hive authenticates as `hive-<hiveName>`
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The identity isn't a choice — a hive authenticates as `hive-<hiveName>`
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and publishes under `hiveName`, the same name that keys `swarm.hives`.
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If a hive stops reporting, its own dashboard is the place to look: a
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failure to publish raises a warning banner there after three consecutive
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misses. It stays `warn` rather than `crit` on purpose — a hive that
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cannot reach the queue is not itself unhealthy, so it does not start
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calling itself degraded for being unable to say it is fine.
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can't reach the queue isn't itself unhealthy, so it doesn't start
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calling itself degraded for being unable to say it's fine.
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The endpoint answers **503** when this host has no swarm queue
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configured, or has one and cannot read it — deliberately not an empty
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configured, or has one and can't read it — deliberately not an empty
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list, which would look like a silent swarm rather than a controller that
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cannot see. The body says which. Status survives a controller restart:
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it is stored in the queue, not in the daemon.
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can't see. The body says which. Status survives a controller restart:
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it's stored in the queue, not in the daemon.
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### Swarm-wide forge webhooks
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registration never added a recipient — it took delivery away from
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whichever hive registered before it.
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**The `agent-configs` org is not yet.** Each hive still registers its own
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**The `agent-configs` org isn't yet.** Each hive still registers its own
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`pull_request` hook there, so that repo has two — the hive's and the
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controller's — and **both are expected; do not delete either.** Removing
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controller's — and **both are expected; don't delete either.** Removing
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a hive's stops it acting on config PRs; removing the controller's just
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gets recreated on its next start.
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Nothing to configure. The hooks are registered only when this host also
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serves the swarm UI vhost — that is what publishes the endpoint, and a
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hook the forge cannot reach would collect failed deliveries while
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serves the swarm UI vhost — that's what publishes the endpoint, and a
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hook the forge can't reach would collect failed deliveries while
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looking healthy. The HMAC secret is generated on first start and kept
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(see [`docs/agent-lifecycle/persistence.md`](../agent-lifecycle/persistence.md)).
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To check it is working, push to `internal/knowledge` and look for
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To check it's working, push to `internal/knowledge` and look for
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`webhook: verified delivery` in `journalctl -u swarm-controller`. A
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refused delivery logs `webhook: refused delivery` with the reason.
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